Tomorrow

Tomorrow

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Number 21 of 28. Tomorrow (that is Sunday) really is the deadline.

So there it is.

Also I guess this is track 50 for me for 50/90 so I win? But I still have a TON of songs to go... finish this song-story arc, for one thing.

Lyrics: 

another sleepless night
I'd rather blame it on the mosquitos
another sleepless night
but it's from the stress from head to toes

tomorrow is the final day
tomorrow it all ends at last
tomorrow I will have my say
tomorrow this will all be past

another sleepless night
and how I wish it were tomorrow
another sleepless night
but troubles I don't need to borrow

tomorrow is the final day
tomorrow it all ends at last
tomorrow I will have my say
tomorrow this will all be past



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Comments

standup's picture

Interesting melody, cool tune. This song doesn't 'sound' stressed-out, perhaps, but the message of the lyric is crystal clear.

Acoustic one-take, but maybe in a future version the guitar could be more nervous and little edgy/perhaps uglier?? Just a thought.

Amanda Rose Riley's picture

I like the calming folk music with a bit of funkiness in the chorus, and simple but emotionally effective lyrics.