I Could Be Good For You

I Could Be Good For You

adamh's picture

Demo: 

Lyrics: 

I’m just a man
Doing everything I can
To keep you in my world
Doors open and close
Wherever you go
You don't seem to know, where’s best for you

I, I could be good for you

You hold me away,
When I desperate to stay
Cause I feel darkness and shame in you
It ain't lost on me,
If you could only see,
That ill be here, il be here for you

I, I could be good for you

I see you watching your toes,
Pretending nobody know,
Nobody knows, Nobody knows a thing about you,

I want to know you,
I want to know you,

Cause I could be good for you



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Comments

ductapeguy's picture

This has a really solid contemporary rock groove, and the lyrics are solid. Well done.

coolparadiso's picture

Had me from the first bar. really well done. you get a real yearning in the voice and music. the way to tell a whole story in few words!

Kristi's picture

There's a lot of conviction in the vocal delivery and playing and it sounds really good. The message is clear and convincing. I like how the "I"s are repeated....affirming the message of "being good for you". Good song.