In the End

In the End

Chandra83's picture



There is blood everywhere
I can't stop it
It fills everything
And keeps coming

I stand at the centre
Of a war
That I didn't start
But may have to end

May the gods help me
And may the mortals
Be the victors
In the end.

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Amanda Rose Riley's picture

Nice little lyric there, I like to read poetry sometimes and it feels like something that would be in a poetry anthology. I could see a short lyric of this tone working well with a style like Evanescence's, where the production would build so that sections of the song might be repeated but take on more heft the second time, and also have long musical interludes in between them.