Swiftly

Swiftly

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Lyrics: 

I walk unnoticed
Through the world
Seeing
But not being seen

I am a shadow
I am darkness
I appear
Only in nightmares

I bring death swiftly
To every devil
and every demon
Who ever dares
To cross me.



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AndyGetch's picture

Well formed concept with shadows, darkness, nightmares as a hero conquering death, devils, demons. Quite a cross-stanza ending rhyme too Smile