Sent us to our rooms

Sent us to our rooms

gregjwere's picture

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Discuss power of planet to look after itself.

Lyrics: 

Sent us to our rooms:

The wings of song birds lie lame
More than forest fires here to blame
We could calve ways more profound a breathe more life in life profound
Only if we choose...only we choose

Time will never disappear,
Silent oceans stretching blue and clear
The Earth dances to its tune
To hold itself together and to entertain the moon
To entertain the moon

But now its stands upon its hill
Quickly taking back the broken wheel
From the promise its thinking to repeal
And sent us to our rooms

Who can't trust the butterfly or understand the reasons of design
A change a s gentle as it true
Uplifting broken wings only we choose

But now its stands upon its hill
Quickly taking back the broken wheel
From the promise its thinking to repeal
And sent us to our rooms and sent us to our rooms.



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Comments

mike skliar's picture

nicely done! I hear the nick drake influence clearly.... very poetic and engrossing lyric and you've taken a difficult subject and written a fine creation!

wobbie wobbit's picture

yep i can hear the nick drake there too. lovely gentle yet bubbling along vibe. i like the hook in particular

Calum Carlyle's picture

Well i really liked this one. Cool and clear. I hesitate to say it reminded me of Nick Drake, but it did. Something about the way your chords and melody go together.