Eternity (‘I will’ prompt)
I read @corinne54’s skirmish prompt at 3:18, and the first line of this lyric jumped into my basket, and I had to take it home and try to make sense of it. Two hours to get this finished.
Now I think it’s time for a change. Might do another take on this prompt with the other idea that was left behind.
I will only last a lifetime
Following the ones who went before me
To show me
I will only taste forever
When the moment dips into eternity
To hold me
We’re mining for treasure
while our time is here
a breath, like a feather
that’s keeping us here
I can only ask a favor
If you have the time to sit beside me
Come find me
I may only have a moment
But I want to share it with someone who
touched eternity too
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