Until the Dawn

Until the Dawn

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Lovely lyric by Lady Red (*42734) that I've tried (hopefully successfully) to turn into a loving sort of song.

Lyrics: 

Lay with me
Hold me close
You are the one
I need the most

You keep the nightmares
From haunting me
And silence the voices
That are taunting me

So stay with me
Until the dawn
To help hold back
All that is wrong.



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Comments

Donna Devine's picture

Nice tight lyric. Has a poignancy about it. The music and vocals (good intensity) match the mood well. The whistling is a nice touch. A kind of 'whistling in the dark' to keep away the things that go bump in the night. Smile

Cicpisces's picture

Nice melody. Strong lyric. Sometimes the simpler you make them the more powerful they are. Good write.

billwhite51's picture

three reasons not to sleep alone, well stated lyrically and expressed musically

kahlo2013's picture

I always love how much meaning you convey in your concise lyrics and the acoustic strong emotive delivery is perfect in conveying that strong sentiment and adding a sense of security. Perfect collaboration!

cts's picture

...and here I thought "the twin" wasn't hanging around this time. The two of you make a great team. Seriously.

phylo's picture

Nice vocals, very evocative around those lovely words. Makes me want to pick up my 12 string!

DeannaSweidel's picture

Stunning lyric and Alex's vocals give it so much depth and feeling. Well don you two

Stephen Wordsmith's picture

Are you sure this was written by the evil twin? This sounds intimate in a not unwholesome way. Love the melody and the vocal soar, especially at the start of verse 2. Aaaaaand there's the whistling. +1.

Nice tight write, delivered in a very fluid cadence.