Bloody Visions

Bloody Visions

Chandra83's picture



Bloody visions
Fill my head
Demons have won
Mortals are dead

I stand among them
Cold and alone
Before me looms
A jagged throne

It calls to me
As though I should rule
As a wicked goddess
And not a mortal fool

I scream aloud
And then I wake
I pray to the heavens
My soul to take.

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A.Eye's picture

This makes me think of Mordor. I think it might be how you describe it all.

dzd's picture

This is another really vivid one(they all are, you have a very concise style I really appreciate, no wasted words) A lot of poetry needs a good picture for me to really appreciate it, I tend to think more in sight/sound.......I think the words here do the painting quite nicely!