Unseen Forces

Unseen Forces

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Random collab. Laurie sent me a lyric and I sent her a basic idea that wasn't really working that well. She wrote a quick new lyric and it inspired me a lot to revise/revamp my original idea and this is the result. A fun collab and I thoroughly enjoyed working with Laurie!

Lyrics: 

V 1 )
Unseen forces
Ghosts of the past
By candlelight All my doubts are cast

V 2 )
The shadows on the wall
The noises from the floor above me
Echos of when you loved me last

Chorus
A haunted house -A haunted life
A single man
A wedded wife
She found what she went looking for
Shes Safe and sound
But I still love her more

V3)
I've met them on the riverbank
Where lovers always walk
She promised to come by the house to talk

V4)
dust and cob webs
Unseen forces
I doubt that she will keep her promises

Chorus
A haunted house -A haunted life
A single man
A wedded wife
She found what she went looking for
Shes Safe and sound
But I still love her more



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Comments

wobbie wobbit's picture

i like the overall feel of this and really like that synth line that sings behind an interesting scenario

Vegansongs's picture

It's live! Thank you Jeff! I thoroughly enjoyed working with you too!

dzd's picture

you're link in the forum thread seems to be broke....had to track it down! well worth it!

Great ghosty synths, good driving rhythm really captures the feel of this lyric....great collab you guys!

fresh spotless youth's picture

Way to hit us with that big hook right out of the gate! Great chorus, and I love those bvox. Super hooky tune, and a mysterious lyric

Scubed's picture

Very nice! I really like the musical energy here, and the lyrics are both engaging and intriguing. Great collab!

Cicpisces's picture

Enjoyed the song. Sweet tone and harmony in the chorus. Liked the mysterious lyric. Has a ghostly vibe going through it. Nice collab.

Wolf Kier's picture

Lovely production, loving the moogy synth hook and solo. Great ghosty sound. Partically taken by the chorus, musically and lyrically. Talent here! Great collab, you guys. Bringing the spooks to solid pop! Enjoyed much.

Jeff, thanks for your kind words on my first. Much appreciated.