I'm Alright

I'm Alright

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Late to the game since my daughter and Grandkids were here. Kind of a strange one.

Lyrics: 

I'm Alright
© 2020 Cindy Prince

I'm alright
I'm all wrong
I will fight
And be strong

I am loud
I am quiet
In unfair things
I will riot

Chorus
I'm alright
Try to look at the bright side
I'm complex
That is except when I'm cockeyed
I change from day to day
But I always say
I'm alright
Yeah, I'm alright

I am silly
I am sane
Seems at times
I have no brain

I am honest
I am kind
That is unless
I change my mind

Repeat chorus



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Comments

barbara's picture

I like the acceptance of all of it that comes across. And I expecially like v2, and that rhyme of quiet and riot. That’s a terse little nugget of a verse! Well done letting this one rise up and be as ‘strange’ as it wanted to be!

JWHanberry's picture

Beautifully simple self examination. It's just right to the point without any extra words. Like you I imagine. Nicely done.

Chip Withrow's picture

This is great! Complex thoughts, well-chosen words. Sharp rhymes!

mike skliar's picture

ah, an 'i contain multitudes' take on it- nicely done!!!

tcelliott's picture

That's most of us. That's me depending on the day. You nailed that juxtapostion of human nature.

coolparadiso's picture

Nice. Nicely twisted in riot. Sounds like real person not a dream unrealistic one.

Adnama17's picture

Embracing yourself is key, quirks, contradictions, flaws, and all.
These lines made my entire day!
"I'm complex
That is except when I'm cockeyed".
Love it!

i love the final verse bit before the chorus, i feel it expresses itself very well. good job! im liking the strange... Biggrin