Our Tiny Forever

Our Tiny Forever

Adnama17's picture



Liner Notes: 

There's more to this, but you know, skirmish and all that.

Also, I love Major 7 chords. <3


When I look
Into your eyes
I’m drawn away
For just a moment
We can stay
In our tiny forever

I was lost
Then you found me
Gave me a home
I had such a thirst
I didn’t know
Just how much I’d overgrown

Come to me
Come to me
To our tiny forever

Even though
Time’s not our friend
And we should know
That we shouldn’t hope
I am glad
For our tiny forever

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


motisbeard's picture

That phrase "our tiny forever" is a lovely little lyric. The groove is nice and easy and calming and works very well!

dzd's picture

have to agree with loving the tiny forever line!

You're also forgiven for being late, hahah.....pffttt who wouldn't be distracted by a butterfly!

tcelliott's picture

That chorus is great. Simple, elegant and it just feels right. This is a good one, you were right.

JWHanberry's picture

I'll jump on the "tiny forever" train. That's just a wonderful idea. Nice sounding song. Good skirmishing.

kahlo2013's picture

I LOVE this and the whole concept of a tiny forever - those words speak so tenderly of a deep but short lived love - a love that seemingly was understood to be intense but short from the start. Such power and poignancy. And such a gorgeous delivery.

tjeff's picture

I like the maj 7 chords too. I really like "our tiny forever." Very pretty melody and good vocals. They simplicity of the chorus is very nice.

You had me at the title. That paints a picture all by itself.

And yeah - major sevenths rule!

AndyGetch's picture

This is so sweet and my guess is a perfect song for a certain little burrito Smile

A.Eye's picture

Awwwwwww (this is oddly wholesome for you lol) awwwwwwww. Great bit of lyric writing coupled with the chord choices here. All plays together very nicely.