My Dead, Dead Girl

My Dead, Dead Girl

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Catherine Wacha posted a challenge where she assigns a title from a Horror Movie as a prompt to those in the challenge. She assigned me DeadGirl

I immediately knew I had to write lyrics for an uptempo poppy or punky rock love song.

Collaborator welcome and desired!

Lyrics: 

my dead, dead girl

V1
walking down the street
in ripped up muddy clothes
with arms outstretched
blood dripping from her nose

with pupils fixed and dilated
in eyes that never close
she is pale as a ghost
and partially decomposed

L
and I love her so....oh..oh...oh...oh....

C
she is my
dead... crush
she makes my
cheeks... blush
whenever
she comes near

she is my
dead.. crush
she makes my
blood... rush
whenever
she is here

yeah! she is my
dead love
she is my
dead girl
and I can’t...
get enough
of this dead...
dead girl

V2
hanging with the zombies
partying through the night
loving the intensity of
giving onlookers a fright

with hunger for fresh brains
blood everywhere in sight
she is always feeding
my sexual appetite

L
and I love her so....oh..oh...oh...oh....

C
she is my
dead... crush
she makes my
cheeks... blush
whenever
she comes near

she is my
dead.. crush
she makes my
blood... rush
whenever
she is here

yeah! she is my
dead love
she is my
dead girl
and I can’t...
get enough
of this dead...
dead girl

B
she’s so very charismatic
but this bleeding heart fanatic
has become problematic
I need new hemostatics
something quick dramatic
to maintain my hydrostatics
with this dead dead girl
of mine

C
she is my
dead... crush
she makes my
cheeks... blush
whenever
she comes near

she is my
dead.. crush
she makes my
blood... rush
whenever
she is here

yeah! she is my
dead love
she is my
dead girl
and I can’t...
get enough
of this dead...
dead girl



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Comments

Amanda Rose Riley's picture

Ha, love what you did with this title! An interesting, original tongue-in-cheek song, I love the rhymes you managed in the bridge especially. It kind of reminds me of the Misfits or TSOL. I wonder if anyone here is making that style of music and could collab on it!

DeannaSweidel's picture

I just love this and I need someone to turn it into a super fun Halloween type song because we all need this much fun right now!!!!!

wacha's picture

I am in LOVE with this! It's so smart and fun. I'd love to take a crack at music if you'd like.

I'm trying very hard to get out a murder ballad rut, this may do the trick.

billwhite51's picture

this is hilarious..you shoud watch the movie. it is the most disturbing treatment of male adolescent sexuality i have ever seen.

see-man-ski's picture

great stuff, reading through the lyrics I had visions of this turning into some kind of industrial metal number. I'm thinking NiN the downwards spiral kind of angst.

Kristi's picture

Great flow and creativity...the details make it all very visual. Great fun! The bridge has some wonderful rhymes that fall off the tongue. Nicely done!

sph's picture

This is big fun. The lyrics already sing themselves. Eager to hear a version of this