Of this Bite

Of this Bite

Chandra83's picture



Teeth like needles
Pierce my skin
He clutches me
And drinks me in

I am weak
And cannot fight
The intensity
Of this bite

Soon, I'm gone
Lost to the world
About to become
His immortal girl.

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AlexMalaska's picture

Really chilling horror lyric. I like the first person perspective, it adds to the immediacy of the lyric. I also like the way I experienced a complex set of emotions the way this scene was cast. On one hand, it’s horrifying and tragic. On the other hand, maybe it’s a love story.