Body and Flesh

Body and Flesh

LadyRed's picture



Use your teeth
Break my skin
pull me close
Draw me in

My body
Your flesh
My soul
Your breath

Meet me
Break me
Bruise me
Make me

This is us
One together
Heart by heart
Always, forever

My body
Your flesh
My soul
Your breath.

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AndyGetch's picture

I like this one especially how the chorus alliteratively loops back on itself.

marthienel's picture

I like this because it uses minimalistic lyrics and yet says it all.

IA's picture

This is like marriage vows. So poetic, but also very solemn. There's a pledge there.

I appreciate stuff that flows like this. Short lines that fall into the next.