Thoughts Nocturnal

Thoughts Nocturnal

tcelliott's picture
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Liner Notes: 

Music/chord progression first (lost the cool strum to begin with) then it took a while to find some words that worked. I hope these do.

Lyrics: 

I can still smell your perfume
If I try long enough
I'm still sleeping in our room
All your things remain untouched

I wake up in the middle of the night
Remember you are gone
I can't stop thinking of you

I can see you in my mind
Though you're gone you haven't changed
I think about you all the time
Nothing else is quite the same

I wake up in the middle of the night
Remember you are gone
I can't stop thinking of you

I take a drink and I pop some pills
Still trying to get some sleep
I lie down but I can't sit still
Always feeling incomplete

I wake up in the middle of the night
Remember you are gone
I can't stop thinking of you



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Comments

AndyGetch's picture

That change will take a long time to get used to. Captured well done in the hour!

Vegansongs's picture

Oh bittersweetness.. Great lyric and pretty guitar , nice open spaces in the music..for some ooo ooo ooohs! THanks for skirmishing!

tjeff's picture

You came up with a fine lyric, and melody to boot - the chorus is very catchy. Really cool guitar intro.

wacha's picture

Very nice, sad lost love song. The guitar has a sense of longing to it which works well with the lyrics. I really dig the rhythm you've got going here. Nice job!