Deep as Night

Deep as Night

Chandra83's picture



I imagine Death
And he comes to me
Cold as winter
Soft as memory

But his touch soothes
And my mind stops
Whirling around
Like spinning tops

And I fall asleep
And awake in light
Because of a friend
As deep as night.

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Roddy's picture

Nice work, death as a comfort and liberator is a good topic for a poem, you write a very complete and satisfying poem here.

tamsnumber4's picture

This is GORGEOUS. Deep as night, great hook, wonderful images...I can't stop reading it....