Angry Bad Bitter Sad

Angry Bad Bitter Sad

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Liner Notes: 

Skirmish prompt: Angry

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Lyrics: 

Angry Bad Bitter Sad

V1
I would be so angry
if I wasn’t so sad
about eroded hopes
from good times you had
you were a raging wild river
after a stormy day
that washed all the dreams
with you away
and left me flooded...
flooded with tears

C
there is a thin line between
angry and sad
there Is a thin line between
bitter and bad
where those lines cross
is where I seem to be at
tangled in a
fragile web
of angry bad bitter sad

V2
I would be so bitter
if I didn’t feel so bad
about lies you fed me
and your secret dyads
you were a unleashed tiger
always stalking new prey
that left me lonely
day after day
and left me starved....
starved for love

C
there is a thin line between
angry and sad
there Is a thin line between
bitter and bad
where those lines cross
is where I seem to be at
tangled in a
fragile web
of angry bad bitter sad



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

'dyads' was an unexpected and clever word to rhyme with 'bad'. Powerful lyric!

AndyGetch's picture

oh the unleashed tiger stalking. What a metaphor!

corinne54's picture

Lots of good lines here. I especially like

you were a raging wild river
after a stormy day
that washed all the dreams
with you away

tjeff's picture

What a fantastic title and take on the prompt. I can relate to the thin lines between emotions and your lyric really made me think. Thx!