Remember Me When Im Gone

Remember Me When Im Gone

adamh's picture

Demo: 

Lyrics: 

Take a walk with me, down by the riverside,
Ill show you thing that I never meant to hide,
Round the corners of my egos mind,
See the boy who watching from the other side

Take a look with the eyes of your soul,
And remember me once I’m gone,

Let me share my inner world with you tonight,
Lift away the walls that keep you locked outside
In the castle of my weary mind
Walk with me into the moonlight of my life

Take a look with the eyes of your soul,
And remember me once I’m gone,

Take a look with the eyes of your soul,
And remember me once I’m gone,



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Comments

pokerowan's picture

Wonderful sustained rhyme scheme and beautiful tab work. Lovely to listen to - great job pal!

DeannaSweidel's picture

'the eyes of your soul' - what a fantastic line. Beautifully haunting song

Jessica Szturmann's picture

I really like the guitar picking. The sound is a little psychedelic, which works with "the eyes of the soul". Makes me think of Jim Morrison. Great tune!