Journey

Journey

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Journey

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Liner Notes: 

Just a silly rhyme. Needs a silly soundtrack.

Lyrics: 

I ran
To Milan
And back again
Met a man
Named Stan

We talked
About storks
Went for a walk
Ate roast pork
With forks

Then left
Where we’d met
Won’t soon forget
What we said
In bed

And the universe keeps track



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Comments

wacha's picture

This is a very nice glimpse as at tiny bit of a life. Like a small vignette. I like it a lot, there is sill energy about it but the last line "And the universe keeps track" leaves you thinking at the end. Very nice job!