The Only Sure Way

The Only Sure Way

Donna Devine's picture

Tags: 

Liner Notes: 

Penned ultra quickly. The usual qualifier: revising (maybe) post-Challenge. Wink

I hear it uptempo with male vocals.

Update: Tweaking already. New bridge (not dark like the original).

*With a collaborator. Demo in the pipeline.

Lyrics: 

The Only Sure Way

V1
The only sure way
My heart can be heard
Is watching you smile
As I search for each word

V2
The only sure way
My mind can be still
Is knowing you’re here
And it's of your free will

Bridge
You’re the very first light
That’s ever shone brightly for me
Revealing the places where once I would hide
Erasing the traces of sorrow inside
Showing the man I can be

V3
The only sure way
My soul can rejoice
Is feeling the love
In the sound of your voice

© 2020 Donna Devine



Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.

Comments

IA's picture

Oh my! Dark indeed.

Could be about joker and Harley if you go for the comic books.

The repetition really works with the different examples.

Great work!

sam sorrow's picture

I like the repetition a lot. verse 2 is my favorite. I enjoyed reading.

tcelliott's picture

It's not often I see a lyric without a chorus. Obviously, that first line repetition works as one and I think it works well. I think you've pulled it off rather well.

Stephen Wordsmith's picture

The verses are liltingly fluent but the bridge is utterly mellifluous. With verses like these, who needs a chorus?