Long Story Short (She Doesn't Love Me Anymore)

Long Story Short (She Doesn't Love Me Anymore)

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For the songfight prompt due 2019.10.02

Lyrics: 

I don't know why she never said goodbye
If it was me or if she found some other guy
Don't know what I did so wrong
Or that she'd stay away this long
I guess I never realized

I guess I'll never truly understand
Why she packed up all her shit and ran
I keep thinking that I missed a clue
In the things she would say or do
I guess I wasn't in her plans

I saw her on the street today
She turned and looked the other way
Long story short she doesn't love me anymore

I like to think we could've stayed friends
Maybe visit every now and again
Long story short she doesn't love me anymore

I saw her on the street today
She turned and looked the other way
Long story short she doesn't love me anymore

I like to think we could've stayed friends
Maybe even visit every now and again
Long story short she doesn't love me anymore
Long story short she doesn't love me anymore



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Comments

coolparadiso's picture

Really enjoying your guitar - lays a base for this very real and sad story. Nicely done

kahlo2013's picture

Your guitar on this sounds fabulous and works well with the backing track and your melody. The emotion in the vocals is great! Wonderful production too. I really like the instrumental interlude with keys and guitar. The driving rock is a perfect vehicle for the sentiment of the lyrics. The lyrics are very effective with a strong hook. This is a great song.