I'll Know It's Over

I'll Know It's Over

Amanda West's picture
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Lyric written for the superskirmish # ss092919q Theme: When will it end? Anything having to do with an ending, the finish line, its over

Lyrics: 

v1
I knew what you were going to say
It said you were sorry but,
And it's always the but that causes the tears
In the end

pre ch
How can I know for sure, how am I meant to endure

chorus
I'll know it's over
When there's nothing to say anymore
Ooh ooh ooh I'll know it's over
When I give in and curl up and cry
Ooh ooh ooh
And my eyes run dry
Then it's over

v2
I need another chance to try
But that was also closed away
In your empty gaze from miserable eyes
In the end

pre ch
How can I know for sure and
How much do I have to endure until

chorus
I'll know it's over
When there's nothing to say anymore
Ooh ooh ooh I'll know it's over
When I give in and curl up and cry
Ooh ooh ooh
And my eyes run dry
Then it's over

Bridge
You wrecked my heart
In a thousand pieces
My eyes are marred
Seeing only paleness
In the deep pitch-dark
We are apart

pre ch
How can I know for sure and
How much do I have to endure until

chorus
I'll know it's over
When there's nothing to say anymore
Ooh ooh ooh I'll know it's over
When I give in and curl up and cry
Ooh ooh ooh
And my eyes run dry
Then it's over



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Comments

JWHanberry's picture

That's a very desperate lyric. Certainly conveys the pain. Good skirmishing with you my friend. Take care.

coolparadiso's picture

Yes very desperate. Sounds like a country song Smile Nice skirmish

AndyGetch's picture

Oh this lyric sings off the page about the frustration and angst of a bad ending.

corinne54's picture

Sort of a tears in your beers style lyric, which is not to minimize the feelings therein. You did a fine fine job Amanda. Thanks for joining in.

cindyrella's picture

Full of emotion and a good country song! I love the different ways we see a prompt.

Chip Withrow's picture

This is powerful! I imagine it as a slow-burn soul ballad. A singer could really do some interesting things with the varying line lengths.

jcollins's picture

Looking at the lyrics...we got tears and endure...notable ooh sections in the chorus scattered broken heart, almost like random country thinking...lol. Clearly second person in the bridge you wrecked my heart. I guess another one to add onto the list. Or rather, means I think it is worth pursuing further. Great job on this.

kahlo2013's picture

This is so intimate and intense in the emotion you deliver with every line. The chorus is really powerful in expressing the sentiment and the bridge is perfect!

musicsongwriter's picture

Very sincere, sad, crying lyrics. Looking forward to hearing them. Please keep me posted.
Nadia