Please Move

Please Move

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I started this song for the songfight prompt, "Please Move" but I never finished. I either ran out of time or I didn't like the idea or.. erm, something. I was cleaning up some files and ran across the first verse and chorus. So I found the scribbles, finished the last verse and recorded a quick version just to have it done.

Lyrics: 

Please move, get out of the way
I need you gone, you can't stay
Get out of here, just move along
It doesn't matter who's right or wrong
Please move

Please move, I don't need you here
It's too late for crocodile tears
I learned my lesson and you must go
I'll tell you again but you already know
Please move

Through all the times I wanted you to stay with me
I need you to say you'd take me seriously
I could tell by the look in your eyes
You were already gone
It's too late to change your mind, you have to leave
Please move

Please move, you've gotta get on
You can't stay where you don't belong
I've got better things to do with my time
You gotta move on, leave me behind
Please move

Through all the times I wanted you to stay with me
I need you to say you'd take me seriously
I could tell by the look in your eyes
You were already gone
It's too late to change your mind, you have to leave
Please move
Please move



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Comments

Chip Withrow's picture

Nifty guitar hook to draw me in, and then a great song! Excellent lyrics,and simply replacing a more common word like "leave" with "move" for the title is such a cool twist.
Thoroughly enjoyed, as usual with your songs.