Love With Abandon

Love With Abandon

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Liner Notes: 

Prompt: Obstruct

Lyrics: 

V1
instruct me
on what you need
construct love
with dignity
engage me
to trust your lead
assuage me
expertly

L
and I will follow you....

C
come
instruct and construct
come
deduct and abduct
come
obstruct and destruct
to make love right
let’s make love
with abandon
tonight

V2
deduct the
unspoken dreams
abduct love
to infinity
involve me
to take it deep
resolve to
eternity

L
and I will be there too....

C
come
instruct and construct
come
deduct and abduct
come
obstruct and destruct
to make love right
let’s make love
with abandon
tonight

V3
obstruct all
distracting things
destruct the
uncertainty
unravel me
in moonbeams
take love beyond
known extremes

L
and I will come with you....

C
come
instruct and construct
come
deduct and abduct
come
obstruct and destruct
to make love right
let’s make love
with abandon
tonight



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Comments

nancyrost's picture

I like how you let the prompt be a small part of the whole and let the sounds lead you to this passionate love list - inspiring!

JWHanberry's picture

I like the abduct to infinity line. Good job finding rhymes to obstruct that perfectly fit your narrative.

coolparadiso's picture

I like the almost staccato feel of the lyric. Good structure and rhyming makes this a very interesting lyric.