Tired Whys in Tired Eyes

Tired Whys in Tired Eyes

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Skirmish prompt: tired eyes

Lyrics: 

V1
time starts
not smart
poison darts
tired hearts

not smart
tired hearts
tired...

C
tired hearts
tired eyes
tired sobs
and when love dies
more tired whys
in tired eyes

V2
time flies
unwise
no disguise
tired eyes

unwise
tired eyes
tired..

C
tired hearts
tired eyes
tired sobs
and when love dies
more tired whys
in tired eyes

V3
time stops
love flops
tears drop
tired sobs

love flops
tired sobs
tired..

C
tired hearts
tired eyes
tired sobs
and when love dies
more tired whys
in tired eyes

OUTRO
tired whys
tired whys
in tired eyes
tired...
tired whys
tired whys (fade)



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Comments

AndyGetch's picture

I like how the rhyme exercise has a pattern of weariness. Well done on the skirmish!

metalfoot's picture

Lots of good rhymes here. I think this is a good skirmish effort!