Pizza Roll

Pizza Roll

JWHanberry's picture
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Liner Notes: 

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host metalfoot
prompt pizza

Just a little silliness to get things goin'.

Guitars: Guild D-25
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Note: Skirmish: 1 hour to write and record

Lyrics: 

5090 2019
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Pizza Roll

When we met you seemed real nice
Thought I might like a slice
But as it turned out
Wasn't no good at all
You left me achin'
Couldn't bring home the bacon
You're just a processed doll

You were a bad time giver
You just couldn't deliver
No guarantee that I get my dinner for free
I wanted pepperoni
All I got was a bunch of baloney
That sure didn't taste good to me

Funny how word gets around
Talk is risin' all over town
How you might call your conversation breezy
When people meetcha
They say you got a crust like pizza
To me your talk just sounds cheesy

Thought you was a deep dish
Didn't get what I wished
Bein' with you made me want to be on my own
It ain't surprisin'
There's pizza rolls on my horizon
Have to eat my supper all alone.

©2019 John W Hanberry (ASCAP)
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Comments

metalfoot's picture

This is a wonderfully playful lyric and the music is perfect. Awesome.

tcelliott's picture

I really like your guitar playing, it's very good. I like that lead playing and the 'verb on it is a tasty touch. The lyric is fun/funny. I like how you use the metaphor all throughout. Good stuff.

kahlo2013's picture

Wow! This is fantastic! I love all the pizza and food metaphors for this relationship song and the guitar riffs and solos are fantastic. Awesome delivery and very clever writing! kudos to you!

AndyGetch's picture

Such grooooovvy silliness in this dinner date gone bad song Smile

wobbie wobbit's picture

i like all the pizza themed metaphors and you have a great solid feel for a skirmish with some lovely solos. well skirmished indeed Smile