NUDE

NUDE

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Looking back over some notes I had written regarding the collection of short stories by Raymond Carver called What We Talk About When We Talk About Love. I remember the book being assigned to our class during my time at college. I'm going to attempt a few short songs about perceptions of love. As you're reading/listening, I hope what is a little obvious is that this is a married couple. The city sounds are supposed to represent time past. You'll hear the actress say it's been over 6 months. The entire song speaks of time past before they meet up again.

I'm singing rather low on this one because it was recorded early this morning and I didn't want to wake folks up.

Lyrics: 

After a time of being alone
Thinking about how much she's grown
Dark places 2 wander she's now prone
Don't look back
Don't look back

Taking a chance on a 1 night stand
Risking it all with a willing man
Find the redemption that's out of her hands
Don't look back
Don't look back

Out of the fire and into the fray
Even though she wants 2 stay
She knows there's going 2 B another day
2 look back
Don't look back

Now that she knows and now that she's seen
Everything that she wants 2 B
She takes it all so naturally
Don't look back
Don't look back

He laid there with a tear
"R U okay?"
He said, "you remind me of someone."
"Who's that? I'm...I'm sorry."
"No, no", he said, "It's okay. Do U love what U feel?"
"It feels good, but it might be 6 months talking. But it feels great."
"Then R U willing 2 go...there?"
"Yes."

Together they fell into the bliss
Bound were they to each other's kiss
Time of regret neither 1 would miss
Don't look back
Don't look back

After a time of being alone
Now they both were finally home
Dark places they no longer roamed
Don't look back
Don't look back

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Comments

benjo's picture

Hey bud WOW WOW

a very clever write
to go into this kind of break is incredible
the way you put the story / song together
and the voices you used made it seem so real
this is so now but like you say so then
a brilliant write my friend really enjoyed this

Susan Cantey's picture

"Don't look back" is a great hook. Love all the sound effects and when the drum comes in...wow! Then we have more interesting things and finally the main vocals of the song which rocks!!! This is a freaking movie!! Wonderful. Sooooo original!! Well done!

billwhite51's picture

yeah. this is so much of what i like the most. a bill withers take on a new power generation groove with a little of that bouncing ball of confusion pushing things around a bit. the relaxed vocal draws me in and the spoken breaks are fresh.

nancyrost's picture

I read those stories in college too. This song does capture the quiet feeling of dread that I felt underlying most of them. I like the way you meld music with audio theater in some of your recordings, and this one is really well paced.