New Leaf

New Leaf

JWHanberry's picture
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prompt leaf

Never quite figured where this was going. Needs another verse and some arrangement.

Guitars: '94 Fender Mexi-Telecaster
Amp: '78 Marshall Mk II
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Note: Skirmish: 1 hour to write and record

Lyrics: 

New Leaf

It might be time
To turn over a new leaf
To get in line
With a solid framework of belief

Might make some headway
However brief
Could be the best way
Start today to heal the grief.

©2019 John W Hanberry (ASCAP)
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Comments

coolparadiso's picture

Well its got awesome bones! Great for a skirmish! Cant think of a much higher compliment but it had a bit of a Hendrix feel.

metalfoot's picture

That's a really rockin' edge to the tune and the lyrics do feel like they want to develop some... but what a great starting point!

mike skliar's picture

wow, that comparison to Hendrix is not lying! (and maybe a little electric Neil Young stomp?) --- great feel, great write, great playing.. really coiled intensity here, interesting chords and I really like the lyric...

great work!!

cindyrella's picture

You did this with finesse! Excellent skirmish and music!

MarkG's picture

I like the sound and the groove, especially the deep bass. I like the line about it might be time to get in line with a solid framework, kinda an a-ha moment for the character, but I'm not sure he's going to. I've been thinking, I should give up drinking...someday, maybe.

jcollins's picture

Hello, not the first turn over a new leaf song I've seen....lol. Ok, I'm ready for the audio...hold. Sounds classic something...rock...electro bass...nice guitars...vocals now...sounds better...sounds great...might make some headway...can clearly understand the lyrics...instrumental...changeup now...I like this quite a bit...ok just got the ending. Yeah, great job on this...works for me.

musicsongwriter's picture

Awesome rocking answer to the challenge. Very cool lyrics, vocals, instrumental solos. Brilliant work!
Nadia

barbara's picture

Your versatility always impresses me, and this intense rock sound was very unexpected and quite enjoyable. Deserves the extra love to complete it’s mission, I’d say.

kahlo2013's picture

Love the lyric here - strong clear message - and the rock groove serves as a great foundation. The start of the music lured me right in!

corinne54's picture

The brevity of the lyrics say so much. Nice rockin' music to drive the words forward