Not a Love Song

Not a Love Song

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This is my morph response to Amanda’s lovely lyric about forever love as part of the lyric morph 3.

Here is Amanda’s love song lyric:

http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/song/40285

I kept 100% of structure and rhyme scheme, changed about 50% of the words and did a 180 with the meaning... so no longer a love song but a lyric about wanting to get out of a bad relationship

Lyrics: 

Lyrics: 
V1
let me go
it has been the longest nightmare ever
we’re not close
we have drowned in stormy weather

C
I know you don’t love me
I know you don’t care
you’ve shown me your feelings
I won’t hold back, it’s truth or dare
I can tell you I know your love isn’t real
that’s the way you have made me feel

V2
set love free
when you were always there was never
love isn’t right
please let go there is no forever

C
I know you don’t love me
I know you don’t care
you’ve shown me your feelings
I won’t hold back, it’s truth or dare
I can tell you I know your love isn’t real
that’s the way you have made me feel

B
I don't always say that much
I'm sorry if I'm cruel
I've learned to give what you gave back to you

C
I know you don’t love me
I know you don’t care
you’ve shown me your feelings
I won’t hold back, it’s truth or dare
I can tell you I know your love isn’t real
that’s the way you have made me feel



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Comments

cindyrella's picture

You turned her lyric around beautifully. What an interesting thing this is. Super job!