Noise

Noise

cindyrella's picture
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This is what came to me very quickly. I almost added my stupid fan on my air conditioner/ heater. You can't even talk when it blows!

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Noise
© 2019 Cindy Prince

Cars
Bars
Planes
Trains

Alarms
Firearms
Horns
Newborns

Chorus
The world is full of noise
Some pleasant, some not
Sometimes it makes me crazy
When I can't have a single thought
Without noise...noise

Bridge
The sounds I want to hear
Are laughter and birds
A lullaby I've heard
And sleigh bells so clear

Screams
Ball Teams
Collisions
On television

Bad rappers
Jackhammers
Commotion
Explosions

Repeat chorus



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Comments

coolparadiso's picture

I like the 1 to 2 word lines! Makes it very descriptive but open to your thoughts and some interesting just rhymes. Nice

jcollins's picture

Cindy, I knew you would kill this! Yeah, I like all the rhyming visuals...nice. Fabulous chorus. Fabulous bridge. lol...yeah the last verse I can't resist pointing out the bad rapper's line...lol. Great job Cindy.

kahlo2013's picture

Love the contrast between the desired ‘noise’ in the bridge and all of the other everyday noises that bombard our senses. Effective and strong write.

JWHanberry's picture

The list just keeps getting longer. Good take on this one.

corinne54's picture

You are so right - Some sounds delight, others - yipes!

musicsongwriter's picture

Brilliant lyrics and response to the prompt. Looking forward to hearing them in a rock song.
Nadia

Chip Withrow's picture

It would be cool to record this with all the sounds you describe.
I've been there with all those sounds!