Raining on my Parade

Raining on my Parade

coolparadiso's picture

Liner Notes: 

Lyrics only still away always liked the title was just waiting for some words.

Lyrics: 

Raining on my parade

Dont matter you know
how well i do
Its never enough

Your really not interested
In anything i do
You just want your own stuff

You tell me everyday
That you really love me
But your actions don’t align

What should i do now
I cant keep pretending
That everything is fine

Ok ok Enough is enough
I cant take no more
Of this pathetic charade

I need to find a way
To stop you
raining on my parade

Ive always tried to please
In every i could
But nothing works at all

Just as i think
Im getting up
You watch and let me fall

How can what seemed beautiful
Be so bad
And so clearly broken

I think you only gave
Just enough of you
Mearly an appeasing token

Ok ok Enough is enough
I cant take no more
Of this pathetic charade

I need to find a way
To stop you
raining on my parade. X 2



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Comments

cindyrella's picture

Wonderful lyrics! I love the charade and parade rhymes. Going to be an awesome song!

kahlo2013's picture

This is a great write! I love the structure and how well your words convey the angst of an uneven relationship and the desire yet not quite yet the ability to move on.

cts's picture

Solid structure with an all-too-familiar narrative. I appreciate your waiting on the words to come after the title. I wish I had more patience to do that!

katpiercemusic's picture

This is definitely widely relatable, I think. I like that you can express this so succinctly. I can't do that most of the time. You get the whole story and all the feeling, but still leave space for musical interpretation.