Apparently when I don't get enough quality sleep I turn into a whiny, miserable old git. Sorry about that. I've ordered a new mattress, which I hope will improve matters.
Why is when I try to write better verses
My frame of mind becomes such
That the only thing I can produce is a torrent of garbage and sad, bitter curses?
Just when I think that I've cracked it
And learnt how to write a good song
I get too distracted or carried away
And everything always goes wrong
Why is it when I think I've found the right text
All my subconscious can do
is inform me of all the ways that my grandiose dreams to make money from music were wrecked?
Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.