X-III

X-III

pokerowan's picture

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Demo: 

Liner Notes: 

My microphone's playing up and the timings all went odd. Sorry if I didn't fix all of the tracks properly!

Lyrics: 

I’m rough with fragile issues
I’ve faced down all my fears
Grimacing foot to foot

I’ve scribbled out graffiti
Heartbeat rushing through my ears
Like an open-windowed fast car

There’s nothin’ you can do to scare me
Nothin’ I ent seen
Nothin’ that can set me straight

There’s nothin’ you can do to scare me
I was once thirteen
And it doesn’t get worse than that

Ah,

The only people in the world
Who know the worst I know
Are what’s left of a blood oath

Holding wet hands
I don’t wanna let go
I don’t wanna let go, I don’t wanna let you go

Ah,

Ah



Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.

Comments

billwhite51's picture

amazing lyric carried by a wonderful melody with a compelling voice. who cares a bout trivial timing issues? this is pure poetry on the wind.

coolparadiso's picture

I think you've got something here! Its class in all facets. Could be anything, maybe needs to be a bit longer, but thats picky. This song could be a hit!

Susan Cantey's picture

Very original lyric...ethereal vocals...all working together very well. Love love the harmonies.

There’s nothin’ you can do to scare me
I was once thirteen
And it doesn’t get worse than that

that's my jam right there, I echo with you this feeling, nothing worse than being 13!

Very nice write, love you voice as usual