Fender Of Feeling

Fender Of Feeling

Kurtis Kanttila's picture

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Demo: 

Liner Notes: 

That riff.

Lyrics: 

She moves alone in tattered rags
With a shopping cart full of Metro bags
Wheeling and dealing every stop
Selling gemstones for smokes and pop

She had a story to tell
But it's gone
She's seen and been to Hell
She got bored

She went to Winnipeg for a dream
Couldn't make it past Kenora it seems
She might be a crackhead, might be a Nun
Maybe she's begging just for fun

No one really cares
Not even her
and no one ever dares
To even wonder why

Illusion painted on her eyes
Mystery up to the skies
A fender of feeling and distraction
Avoiding every interaction
One day it's all gonna burst
All your fragments will disperse
You'll only be a memory
To the last conscious of the galaxy

One day it's all gonna burst
All your fragments will disperse
You'll only be a memory
To the last conscious of the galaxy



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Comments

phoenixash's picture

Yeah, THAT RIFF DUDE, but this could just be: THAT EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS SONG MAAAAAAAAAN!!!! Super good, I was banging my head all the way, so nice that there are other metalers here. Awesome write.

jcollins's picture

Looking at the lyrics...wow, some good storytelling through the first two sections. Crackhead or nun...lol...just for fun...why not. Pretty sad too and convincing story. Your lyrics are always good. The next part is really sad too. Powerful last line to the last conscious of the galaxy. I'm ready for the audio now...hold. Big opening...guitar and drums....guitar of the left...very cool...nice pause hits...nice drum roll...vocals now...sounds good...moves quickly...rocks hard....love the pauses...vocals very strong...can clearly understand the lyrics...good mix...chorus now or changeup...one day it's all going to burst....guitars...solo...sounds great...rock rules...this is hella tight...burning guitar solo...love it...vocals...feeling...one day it's all gonna burst...yeah...oh yeah...yeah...alright...nice...riffs...cool change up. Yeah. Kurtis, you're killing me...another awesome track. Just one after another. I love your music man.

owl's picture

I love the specific details in the lyrics, Winnipeg and Kenora, tattered rags and Metro bags. The guitar solo is awesome, and the whole song just feels like retro good fun. Great work!