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Guitars: Guild D-25
Note: Skirmish: 1 hour to write and record



And furthermore I'd like to say
Something no one's ever said before
Without too many words
That would be absurd
I try to keep a little in the drawer
Until furthermore.

And furthermore I'd like to hear
An idea far beyond what's simply called for
Don't wander and get lost
'til my eyes are crossed
Droning on and on a crashing bore
Until furthermore

Furthermore goes far beyond
Potentially to form a bond
Capacity to correspond with destiny
Furthermore looks straight ahead
Panorama's widly spread
Hoping to bring about the best that we.
Can explore.

And furthermore I'd like to see
Our friends and neighbors reach for something more
Don't worry 'bout your past
Time is movin' much too fast
Try to keep your eye on what you came for
Until furthermore

©2019 John W Hanberry (ASCAP)
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tcelliott's picture

I like your melody and vocal phrasing. Your vocal performance works very well with this lyric. That guitar sounded good right from the first note, too. I like your chorus rhymes, too. Strong rhymes that flow easily and well. Well done, especially for a skirmish.

kahlo2013's picture

This is a fantastic country song with insightful lyrics! Love the melody and musical delivery - feels like a country classic but in my opinion the lyrics are much better than most I hear. I love the message and the furthermore sets the listeners ear up well to hear the message. Delightful song!

Adnama17's picture

Awesome! The melody has a movement to it that keeps me engaged. I like how you personify furthermore. And it's also a destination. And a goal. It can mean so many things and you captured that well. Nicely done!