Furthermore

Furthermore

coolparadiso's picture
Feast

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Liner Notes: 

Quick write . Still not able to go home. A bit venomous this one gets.

Lyrics: 

I am writing to tell you
I still miss you everyday
I cant find the words
To tell you my pain today

I miss you when I wake
I miss you at lunch
I guess you never think of me
Well that is my hunch

Furthermore I am writing
To tell this is the end
This is the last time
Sweet messages I send

I'm now angry
And toughening up inside
I'm going to stop worrying
No longer will I hide

So now you see I hope
What really is the score
And I will never
Cry for you no more

Furthermore I am writing
To tell this is the end
This is the last time
A sweet message I will send

And furthermore go xxxx yourself



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Comments

kahlo2013's picture

Nice punch at the end of a stoning pointed farewell lyric! This will be great with music!

tcelliott's picture

Oh, wow. I like that the first verse sets up a love song and then you end it with a go eff yourself. Nice twist and well done.

JWHanberry's picture

Very clear message here. Second stage of grieving. Hope you're feelin' better. It should make quite a rocker.

Adnama17's picture

NICE. I almost wrote in that vein, AND FURTHERMORE!!!
Glad he's moving on. It's time.
<3