I Remember Your Smile

I Remember Your Smile

tcelliott's picture
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Liner Notes: 

I think I stole a melody from a song from last year, but here's this.

Lyrics: 

I remember you standing there
Could have been most anywhere
Ooh, I remember your smile

Thirteen years it was you and me
People said we were meant to be
Ooh, I remember your smile

I remember the way you looked at me
Always smiling happily
I remember your smile
That's my memory

I remember our first date
I know I kept you out too late
Ooh, I remember your smile

We got married and had a child
Had some fights but mostly mild
Ooh, I remember your smile

I remember the way you looked at me
Always smiling happily
I remember your smile
That's my memory

Then the cancer made its mark
Hit us hard, tore us apart
Ooh...

I remember the way you looked at me
Always smiling happily
I remember your smile

I remember the way you looked at me
Always smiling happily
I remember your smile
That's my memory



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Comments

musicsongwriter's picture

Very beautiful sad song and poignant take on skirmish. Beautiful lyrics, music, singing and playing. Why is it not safe for work?

kahlo2013's picture

This is such a great melody and guitar lead in and riff... so if it is stolen it was a great steal. The lyrics are so poignant and tender. Love that hook. Remembering smiles is such a beautiful thing to hold onto about someone we love. Love this song.

coolparadiso's picture

I'm always worried I've done mine before! Lovely intro. It is sad. Really like that guitar run. Nice one.

Adnama17's picture

Damn it, I read ahead. I was hoping there wasn't going to be a sad ending. Damn it.
The repetition of "I remember your smile". Every time you come back around to it, I tear up a little.
Heavy and heartfelt. Hard to hit both sometimes. Nicely done.
Intense songs for this skirmish. Oy vey!