Unconventional Love

Unconventional Love

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Prompt: Unconventional

Lyrics: 

Unconventional Love

V1
entice me with the spice
of your exotic
potpourri

lure me from the constraints
of old familiar
reality

PC
and know that I am open
fully open to you....
and all you want to do.....

C
I want your
unconventional
highly consensual
passionate love

I crave your
unconventional
wildly sensual
exquisite love

that is what I want more of
oh.. I can’t get enough

V2
carry me away deep
into your hottest
fantasy

expose me to fearless love
in all consuming
totality

PC
and know that I am open
fully open to you....
and all that you want to do...

C
it’s your
unconventional
highly consensual
passionate love

it’s your
unconventional
wildly sensual
exquisite love

that is what I want more of...
oh.. I can’t get enough...

B
entice me
lure me
take me down
take me out of bounds
carry me
expose me
make me more
make me fly and soar
with you... ooo...ooo..
like we never have before...

PC/OUTRO
yeah..know that I am open
fully open to you....
and all that you want to do... ooo..ooo...

oh.. I want more of... you...
oh.. I can’t get enough... of what you do...



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Comments

tcelliott's picture

Ooh, a love song. That bridge works very well for me. It has a natural progression to it, with the line lengths generally getting longer. It builds very nicely. You seem to write the best songs of passion and caring and I think they are often a little unconventional... they take angles I wouldn't think of.

coolparadiso's picture

Yes oo first thing in the morning great opening very strong and emotional lyric really good one

jcollins's picture

Looking at the lyrics...potpourri (3. music A medley of songs or music.)...nice. V1 continues to be strong all the way through. PC has a nice message about being open to you. Chorus delivers a bomb and I love it! v2 is extremely hot too...whooo hooo. Your bridge is loaded with goodies too and I did notice ooo...ooo. Outro...oh, I want more of...you. Very nice Liz and you certainly deliver on these types of songs.