Sweet Energy

Sweet Energy

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This one has morphed quite a bit. Originally worked from a phrase from Titular, and then totally took the phrase out. But the concept remains. I'm still tweaking it...every time I read it, I want to change something!! Ha. Oh well...it's 50/90...point is to get ideas out there...

Lyrics: 

SWEET ENERGY


He glanced her way
Every once in a while
She finally caught on
And flashed back a smile

He went to her
Took her hand to dance
They found the music
And started a romance

[ch]
Oh, sweet energy
In the air
Sweet energy
To spend and share
It’s between us
It’s all around
Oh, sweet energy
From dawn to sundown

A wink, a nod
A smile in time
She sends one out
He returns it in kind

Sitting together
Very much in sync
Two people once strangers
Who now find a link

[ch]
Oh, sweet energy
In the air
Sweet energy
To spend and share
It’s between us
It’s all around
Oh, sweet energy
From dawn to sundown

[br]
Our spirit is strong
Resilient and free
Our spirit can give us
Everything we need

Repeat ch

©2019 Kristi McKeever



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cindyrella's picture

This is so sweet! "A wink, a nod.." That is priceless! I f it gets music please let me know.

phoenixash's picture

I'd like to see how this gets turned into music, it's if you pardon me... very sweet indeed. Don't we wish we had this relationship?

kahlo2013's picture

What a lovely song lyric! There is a gentle tenderness and sweetness that evokes such love. Beautiful write!

jcollins's picture

Looking at the lyrics...oh wow, that's a nice scene in the first section before the chorus. It's been so long for me I forgot how to do it...ok. Nice chorus and works well. The beginning of romance is sweet. Yes, the spirit in the bridge is quite attractive. Great job on this Kristi.

Chip Withrow's picture

Sweet sentiment here, and seems ready for music without any changing at all. Reads as something singable, and probably fun to sing, too.