No Place

No Place

tcelliott's picture
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Liner Notes: 

I picked up the guitar, started playing and got the first line of the second verse right off... and just went with it. *shrug*

Lyrics: 

I was sitting in the hotel bar
And you sat next to me
We talked about the lonely road
And we shared a drink or three

I could tell by the look in your eye
You needed just one thing
I acted like I didn't notice
Your silver wedding ring

And there's no place I would rather be
No place I would rather be
The road is hard and the night is long
And I am so lonely
No place I would rather be

I was sitting in my hotel room
No place for a guy like me
And you came walking in
Don't remember giving you a key

I could tell by the look in your eye
You needed just one thing
I acted like I didn't notice
Your silver wedding ring

And there's no place I would rather be
No place I would rather be
The road is hard and the night is long
And I am so lonely
No place I would rather be
No place I would rather be



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Comments

kahlo2013's picture

Great take on the skirmish and use of bonus words. The chorus is really catchy and the emotion conveys how compelling and needed human connections can be at some times in our lives. You build up the story well in the verses and address a vulnerability of human nature in a tender way that probably all have experienced at least in thought.

musicsongwriter's picture

Brilliant take on a skirmish theme and including bonus words too. Very interesting story and great delivery. Very catchy song. Very relatable.
Nadia

Adnama17's picture

Great minds, and all that, eh? It's eerie sometimes. It really is.
Hanging out in bars has been in your last couple of songs. Interesting.
Another heavy song too. A sad and familiar story, sung with lots of emotion.
<3