Like Water (Please hear Demo 40258)

Like Water (Please hear Demo 40258)

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Skirmish Prompt: Water

Late to skirmish
So very quick
And yeah, Sappy, but heartfelt if that counts!

PLEASE hear gorgeous demo by Marthie!!!!
http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/song/40258

Lyrics: 

Like Water

V1
you’re my oceans
you’re my seas
you’re wild rivers
that run through me...
that run through me
and caress me with
endless beauty

PC
like water
you soothe and
move me

C
you quench my thirst
you flood my heart
you bathe my soul
you fill me with love
my cup is full..
my cup is full
as our love
overflows ...

V2
you’re my whirlpools
you’re my lakes
you’re fast waterfalls
that make me quake...
that make me quake
and carry me in
love’s swelling wake...

PC
like water
you sustain and
cascade

C
you quench my thirst
you flood my heart
you bathe my soul
you fill me with love
my cup is full..
my cup is full
as our love
overflows ...

B
oh you fill me up
you expand the love
in my heart
may this love
always flow
over and
back into you

C
you quench my thirst
you flood my heart
you bathe my soul
you fill me with love
my cup is full..
my cup is full
and our love
overflows ...



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Comments

cindyrella's picture

Perfect skirmish and totally different than mine. I love all the water references.Nice!

coolparadiso's picture

Yup lots of water. A bit if sappy never hurt anyone. Nice skirmish

jcollins's picture

Looking at the lyrics...v1 sounds like somebody is in love. PC a comparison with water and a person place or thing. Nice chorus and my cup is full repeated emphasize the point. Also, as our love overflows is very nice. v2 spotlight on make me quake...nice. The bridge, you expand love really jumps at me...very nice skirmish Liz

Chip Withrow's picture

Vivid, heartfelt. I bet this would work with a big, orchestral pop ballad sound. Some cool word choices - bathe, quake, cascade. Good one!

cts's picture

Sappy? I don' think it's sappy. I can sense where you have given this a bit of a rush, but it holds together well, I think. There's strong sentiment here that is truly heartfelt.

Valerie Cox's picture

Not sappy. It's really beautiful. Water is really powerful and gorgeous. Lends itself so we'll to the theme.

Amanda West's picture

Aw how romantic Smile Sometimes sappy is a good thing. And this is certainly a good thing lyric Smile Please let me know when this is musicated Smile