Untangle Me

Untangle Me

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A title of Gwyn's that I put lyrics to. Music and performance by Gwyn. I have been unwell this summer so with Gwyn's help and me on lyrics we have managed a few collabs!

Lyrics: 

UNTANGLE ME (Cooper/Jones)
(c) All Rights Reserved 2019

Woh oh oh oh oh
Untie me
Unbind me
Untangle me from your love

Set me set me set me free
Free me from this misery
If I can’t have you please do the right thing

I need your pity, amnesty
Your kindness and humanity
To cut the chains that link me to your heart

So woh oh oh oh oh
Untie me
Unbind me
Untangle me from your love

I got much more life to live
And much more affection to give
If you don’t want me send me back to sea

I need your ruthless gravity
To tell me that you’re done with me
And save me from a-wastin’ all my time

So woh oh oh oh oh
Untie me
Unbind me
Untangle me from your love

I’m keeping my ten fingers crossed
I’m tying myself up in knots
So please please please just make it stop

So woh oh oh oh oh
Untie me
Unbind me
Untangle me from your love

Woh oh oh oh oh
Untie me
Unbind me
Just lose me
Don’t choose me
Untangle me from your love

So woh oh oh oh oh
Untie me
Unbind me
Untangle me from your love

Woh oh oh oh oh
Untie me
Unbind me
Just lose me
Don’t choose me
Untangle me from your love



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

Really solid melody-- and not at all what I would have thought the words would work to but they work perfectly!

cindyrella's picture

This is super! Nice melody and pace. A pleasure to hear!

tamsnumber4's picture

sounds like a new age Elvis, love the rhythm of this and the vocal dynamics, classic and fun, great song!!

phoenixash's picture

Elvis didn't come home, he came here and danced and sung all over the place. Very pleasant tune, very good to dance to with a partner and your voice really is as good as his.

aricate's picture

What a great groove! I love the untangle me lines a lot!

wobbie wobbit's picture

great rockabilly boppiness. i can picture the whole hall doing the Footsie! love the wohohhoho bit. lovely all round.

tcelliott's picture

Ooh, I'm digging that retro feel/sound. Good performances all around. That title drew me in (great one to write from) and I like the rhythm in the lyric a lot. Just reading them, the feel of the triplet verses is very good and hits that sweet spot. This was a fun one to listen to.