With Me Waitin'

With Me Waitin'

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Liner Notes: 

Apologies for the extremely rough demo, I have to leave the house soon haha.

Lyrics: 

Sixty-thirty pavements
Low light
Treading through the remnants
Of the previous night

You take a drag
Between brackets
It’s such a pain to kick those
Bad habits

And you break a grin against the brittle air
Gonna make it out there
Gonna make it out there
Gonna make it out

Take note of nothin’
‘Cos times are just the same
Remember your manners
Forget shame

Dodge traffic
In the metal maze
And never stop teaching that
Kindness pays

That kindness pays
That tenderness pays
That handsomeness is found
In the gentlest ways

And you break a grin against the brittle air
Gonna make it out there
Gonna make it out there
Gonna make it out

And home
is with me, waitin’

Home
is with me waitin’



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

For a rough recording, the song still shines through well. I enjoyed this a lot. Very determined attitude to the lyrics.

Susan Cantey's picture

Glad you had time to record this before rushing outward into the cold cruel world. Nice sweet song and a lovely sweet voice!!

sbs2018's picture

Love it! Reminds me a bit of James Blunt, one of my favorites I don’t hear anymore.

splittybooms's picture

Your style has all the qualities I love when it comes to vocalists, and these quiet vibes with your music is also the kind of thing I dig. This one is no exception.
Great lyrics at the core, then all the vocal melody choices on top of the nice strumming...yeah this is awesome.
GREAT atmosphere to this.

benjo's picture

Oh yeah

you have the sweetest vocal
and it really goes toward the imagery here
the picture you so masterfully paint
in the wonderfull lyric, is true talent for writing
breaks a grin against the brittle air
what a mind blowing line
this was a pleasure to listen to
and read,

hope you do collabs and see something
in one of my lyrics you like

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