Three Mild Sprains!

Three Mild Sprains!

Rockwrites75's picture

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Liner Notes: 

Hey Everyone, this guy was too clumsy that day. Thanks, your friend Jimmy

Jerry here: I asked Jimmy about this song and he added me as a collaborator. Thanks Jimmy and thanks to everybody for listening.

Production notes: About 4 hours.

Lyrics: 

Three Mild Sprains

Three Mild Sprains
His voice had cracked with the strain
Three Mild Sprains
But he does not complain

He slipped and hurt his ankle
The scene looked too horrible
He fell down and twisted his wrist
Those big steps really do exist

Chorus

He bent down and pulled his back
He needs an ice pack
Then a quick cry of pain
During the time frame

He lies down and elevates his feet
In his spare time he writes songs and reads
There is swelling around, the ankle, wrist and back
Taking his afternoon nap

Bridge
This happened months and weeks ago
He's not leaving today or tomorrow
He's bored four to eight times a day
But that goes away
Mostly on his brain



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Comments

cindyrella's picture

Is this based on you? I f so sorry. Kind of funny and sad writing.

jcollins's picture

Looking at the lyrics...his voice had cracked with a strain...lol. A lot of good rhymes and visuals. Yes, this guy had a bad day. A pretty detailed description of what happened. After the second chorus, he pulled his back out...oh wow. Good rhymes. Taking the afternoon nap...good idea. The bridge...he's bored four to eight times a day...lol. I think this is pretty good Jimmy. I'm thinking the same as Cindy, I hope this wasn't you? Maybe I can try something on this bro.

Rockwrites75's picture

Hey Jerry, my friend wow and many thanks bro. You did an excellent job on your new song I like it. Your vocals, guitar solo and blues music sound awesome.