I'll Take That Pain

I'll Take That Pain

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Stumbled across some lovely lyrics this afternoon by @benjo and was immediately driven to write a song.

Lyrics: 

Verse 1
I’ve been wandering
for all of my life
I’ve been fallen
down for sometime
the rain comes and dries again
but you’re still gone
While the sunshine hurts my eyes
i’ll take that pain

Chorus
Days go by
And i learn about the pain
But the way that I feel
Isn’t the end of the road

Verse 2
I feel safe now
when you’re so far away
Soon you will be here
i’ll have to choose
If i can live this way
with you loving him
While the sunshine hurts my eyes
i’ll take that pain

Chorus
Bridge 1
Bridge 2

Verse 3
The night time is the hardest
to sit with myself
Tornadoes and turmoil
merely insecure
The words you say i can’t all believe
are you sincere
While the sunshine hurts my eyes
i’ll take that pain



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Comments

billwhite51's picture

this sounds like plastic ono band unplugged. i like the way you go from those john lennon type wails in the verses to the lush romaticism of the chorus. the electric and acousic guitars blend very well.

TomS's picture

Big Star Sister Lovers feel. Very nice. Smile

benjo's picture

oh yes very very nice

great guitar love the arrangment
your tone makes this lyric come to life
soft & gruff

LOVED IT ALSO THE TITLE

phoenixash's picture

You are so very good. Your voice is super great it puts emotion in every note and this is melodic, sad and deep.

Acousticmaddie's picture

Beautiful sound. great performance. Nice powerfull song. very emotional grabs a hold of the heart from the first riff