She's My Sugar In The Morning

She's My Sugar In The Morning

Amanda West's picture
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Liner Notes: 

Lyric written for the Saturday skirmish with the theme: The Beatles - something in the style of.

Collabs welcome, please read my profile page blurb on cowriting first please, and check with me that no one else is working on it Smile

Cheers !

UPDATE 15.8.19: @Krayzie003 Samuel is going to musicate this one Smile

Lyrics: 

She's my sugar in the morning
She's so sweet she has my heart
Yeah her love is habit forming
I can't bear to be apart

This is forever
For love is
The most important thing
We'll ever have
We'll ever know
To cherish and let grow

She's my sugar in the morning
And I like my coffee strong
Yeah her love is habit forming
But I know I can't go wrong

She's so gentle and so very kind
So caring and adoring and she's all mine
Everything I want
Everything I need
There's nothing to mislead

She's my sugar in the morning
And I like my coffee strong
Yeah her love is habit forming
But I know I can't go wrong

I'm so lucky she's so lovely and
Incredible-ly beautiful
Everything I want
Everything I need
There's nothing to mislead

She's my sugar in the morning
And I like my coffee strong
Yeah her love is habit forming
But I know I can't go wrong

She's my sugar in the morning
Oh so sweet she makes me smile
Yeah her love is habit forming
I'll be here for quite a while



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Comments

Ggallagher's picture

Love this, really tight structure and I can get a good sense of rhythm with it already. Is there a particular Beatles song you had in your head when writing it?

Amanda West's picture

@Ggallagher Yes, I used 'Devil In Her Heart' as a mirror for structure etc, although I have veered away from it in places.
I'm not that happy with several parts, but that's for another day Smile

cindyrella's picture

This is perfect! So Beatles, I can hear it and I hope you will have a demo soon!

coolparadiso's picture

Nice. Early beatlish, simple uncomplicated love song! On the genre here!

musicsongwriter's picture

Perfect lyrics, so fantastically written and with definite Beatles vibes too. Hope to hear them in a song.
Nadia

jcollins's picture

Looking at the lyrics...nice open with the morning forming rhyme. The next section points out the importance of "love". Definitely, something The Beatles keyed off on during their songwriting run. Next, we have a variation of the first section adds a couple more rhymes strong and wrong. I forgot in the first section you have heart and apart which is very strong too. The next par keys off on everything I want and need, which is a very nice segment of your song. Incredible-ly beautiful (I had to copy that because I can't spell incredible-ly)...lol...very strong images appearing in my mind followed by the everything I want and need. The last part another variation of the first section adding the smile and while rhymes. Good job on this Amanda. I notice this was a skirmish too so bonus time for on the fly pro writing.