The Stars In Your Eyes
THEME/PROMPT: "REACH FOR THE STARS" Modify as you wish
21 minutes over this time.
Really not how I wanted this to go...very incomplete; the whole meaning of the song was kind of omitted cause I didn't have time to go back and fix it.
The idea was that we always want to reach the stars (my take was reaching the actual stars, instead of a motivational take of reaching FOR the stars, with stars being goals) but what if the stars wanted to reach us - but the stars that I am talking about are the stars inside of that beautiful girl's eyes. I want whats in her eyes, but what if (miraculously, with how MY luck goes lol) SHE also yearns for the stars in MY eyes??
So yeah, that whole point was kinda lost here as I didn't get to record the vocals for the rest of what I wanted to say.
Just ended up with a very simple and short demo.
I felt very silly speaking the words in the beginning, and actually deleted a LOT more spoken word stuff (kinda what took away a lot of my time)...
I know i know, do it do it do it anyway and such...but its gonna take time for me to get more comfortable doing stuff. I feel I've come a long way with being able to not cringe at what I have done so far with my voice, so...
Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.