My Heart's Gone Too

My Heart's Gone Too

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Liner Notes: 

This should NOT be construed in any way as the definitive version of My Heart's Gone Too.
It is, however, the version I recorded on July 4 before posting the #FakeIt challenge.

I love the songs everyone's come up with so far and I'll keep listening to hear what everyone else comes up with...
(And next time I'll write a HAPPY lyric for this challenge. LOL)

Lyrics: 

http://bythefont.com/alex/5090-2019/heart.pdf



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Comments

katpiercemusic's picture

This is very pretty! We seem to have a similar preference for modes. This is a wonderful match of music to lyrics, both solid on their own and better together.

billwhite51's picture

this is a sophisticated piece of pop music with a blues foundation that reminded me at time of the zombies. the music on the verses is especially good.

nateger's picture

Melancholic chords and lilting vocal melody. Very enjoyable listen and definitely captured a bleak feeling. When you go to that major chord it really captures the ear - like a little beam of light through the clouds

Jerry Pettit's picture

Hey, great vocal on this, metalfoot! Very nice song and very nicely performed. Very much enjoyed it.

marvsmooth's picture

Actually my second listening of a fake it challenge piece, and it sounds so different to the one by @ductapeguy!

Beautiful performance, gorgeous chords, and a lovely vocal.

Even if the words are a bit sad, it doesn’t stop it from being a beautiful piece!

ductapeguy's picture

I know you don't consider this the "definitive version", but the words and music gel perfectly here. You deliver this melancholy tune so very well.

amusia's picture

I really like the sad, wistful mood of this one. Great melody and chord choices that complement the lyrics perfectly.