Still i’ll try again

Still i’ll try again

coolparadiso's picture
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Liner Notes: 

Too early for music, maybe later

Lyrics: 

I’ll Still try again

V1 I made a mistake in trusting you
I should have stayed alert
If i had played it differently
I guess i wouldn’t hurt

V2 But sometimes you just have to
take a chance on friends
go along for the ride
no matter how it ends

C Still I’m going to try again
Still i don’t know why
Guess its better to love and lose
Than to never ever try

V3 Boredom is my nemesis
Plays to all my fears
Rather take a chance again
Even if it ends in tears

V4 I cant stay closed all the time
I have too much to share
I know ill take a risk again
Its like a game of dare

C Still I’m going to try again
Still i don’t know why
Guess its better to love and lose
Than to never ever try

B life is full of mysteries
Of all those twists and turns
But you have to put in a lot
If you want to get returns

V5 When this journey nears the end
I ll look back with no regret
Its the people who made it special
Thats what i wont forget

V6 So. If i can offer some advice
Dont worry about the odd scar
Take a risk let others in
Stay true to who you are



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

Still I'm going to comment here... Wink
Nice lyric and I like how you've used the word still!

Jibbidy34's picture

A great moral based story song that stays on point throughout. I like the way you developed this from start to finish revealing more and more of your message.

musicsongwriter's picture

Very creative way of using still prompt. I like your lyrics. Now I'm eargely waiting to hear it. Please let me know when your demo is up.
Nadia

cindyrella's picture

Creative and I love seeing all the ways we can use one word!

JWHanberry's picture

A good philosophical take on the prompt. That's a real positive attitude to have.

kahlo2013's picture

Great message in the well crafted musing about life’s love lessons. Really flows well and has a lovely wisdom and insight that is conveyed.

spirulence's picture

Nice development between verses - has a pleasant arc to it. I'm really curious about whether the verses are quick affairs or more drawn out in your thoughts about this piece.

AndyGetch's picture

A whole lotta philosophy packed tightly in this lyric. The music will be interesting.

corinne54's picture

Better to have loved and lost - indeed! You have some fine lines here.

wobbie wobbit's picture

nice expansion of the old maxim. some lovely lines, i like v4 with the game of dare in particular. nice skirmish

Acousticmaddie's picture

Great use of the prompt. Lovely flowing lyrics and great theme to tie the story to.

kc5's picture

I just really like this. Nothing wrong with a little recovery time between, but it is worth the risk and like you, I'd do it again. Just wearing sneakers, not sandals over the crags.