'Breeze'

'Breeze'

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Liner Notes: 

Thank you Corinne for your inspiring title. Here is a very short piano piece. I think it might also work for a spoken word but it's just an idea. Please kindly share with me your thoughts. Thank you for listening. I'm always happy to collaborate if you hear potential for collaborations.
Nadia
Well, I was in a coffee shop and after a pot of tea I decided to use the bathroom. On a door there I saw something scribbled. It read:
"Love me whenever you are"

and under these words someone wrote:
"He does".

These two messages inspired my lyrics. They could be sang or spoken. The music is fast and it is finishing earlier than the lyrics but this could be tweaked. Anyway, thought I'd post. Lyrics posted the following day. My piece is still open to a different collaboration of you hear some other ideas. Please let me know.

Lyrics: 

'Love me, whenever you are'

Love me, whenever you are
Love me sincerely, deeply, forever
Love me even if you are too far
Love me and don't forget me ever

I hear you're saying he will
But I'm not too sure you know
I'm first to admit he loves the thrill
Yes the thrill of the chace, then he lets them go

Love me and only me, no one else around
Stop looking, settle on the one who loves you
I ask you to promise but I hear not a sound
Let's start tomorrow anew

I hear you're saying he will
But I'm not too sure you know
I'm first to admit he loves the thrill
Yes the thrill of the chace, then he lets them go

Love me, whenever you are
Love me sincerely, deeply, forever
Love me even if you are too far
Love me and don't forget me ever



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Comments

corinne54's picture

Gorgeous and lovely - like a breeze! It's perfection!

Jibbidy34's picture

This is definitely a breeze on a warm day! Loved it so much. The movement was just candy to my ears. Great skirmish!

kahlo2013's picture

Airy and gentle like a refreshing breeze! Beautiful!

splittybooms's picture

The character of the piano here fits the theme alone. Its breezy itself.
Lovely as always...
Like a gentle gust travelling through the grass and trees and sidewalks along some boardwalk, picking up little friends (leaves, debris, etc) along the way.
Beautiful piano like this is something I can sit and listen to and just close my eyes...

JWHanberry's picture

A lovely breezy piece. You not only come up with gorgeous songs but you find the coolest pictures to go with them. Good work.

coolparadiso's picture

Very pretty piece. One if favs of yours this time. Expanded would be great with a few lyrics

metalfoot's picture

This song just floats and drifts along like the breeze. Beautiful interpretation of the prompt.

nateger's picture

Wistful chords and beautiful playing. Reminded me of the pause I feel on a hot day when I feel a cool breeze roll through. Something melancholic about realizing I move too fast and need to slow down. Thank you for capturing this feeling in your piece

Amanda West's picture

I hear the little breeze wandering along a riverbank, every now and then venturing out over the water to dip it's toe.

Chip Withrow's picture

I'm curious about what your spoken word idea is, because I surely agree that would be a good use of this lovely song.
Such fluid playing - rolls along with such delicate command. You're in control of the piano, but holding the reins gently.

theresaj's picture

Such beautiful movement in this song. Such emotional words. Breathtaking!